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Re: Elizabeth
Hi there. Thought I would stop by and give this a review. So, you've got a pretty nice story going here. I can follow it very well and you don't ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: The Autumn
He smiled that eternal, seemingly unflappable smile of his, took off his top hat, and bowed his head a little. “How do you do then, Martha Denizen? I must say ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: The Autumn
I live! Sorry about that. Was flying on planes and things on Saturday, and spent most of today crashing. But fear not! I approve of these profiles you set before ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: The Autumn
All right, so all spots have been filled. Now I need character sheets from you guys, based off of the little things I gave you. Feel free to expand and ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: The Autumn
It is the year 1902, in a world that is almost like ours, but not quite. Countries are almost the same, but noticeably different. Ideologies have suffered the same fate ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: Never Ending Land
Hi there. I just thought I would stop by and give my two cents on this. So, I really like this little story that you told here. And I also ...
May 13, 2010 -
Re: Preservation
Hi there. Just saw this and how it only had two reviews, so I decided to stop in and give it a review. First off, I have to agree with ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: Vampire House
Rob and Nathan stood on the sidewalk, looking up at the old hotel. It seemed somewhat reminiscent of a decaying body, with the skeletal framework showing through in the places ...
May 12, 2010 -
Re: The Girl Who Wore Men's Cologne
Hi there! I thought that I would stop in and give this a quick review. So, you have an interesting concept and subject matter here, and I rather like that. ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Dream
Hi there! I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer tonight. So, I really think that you have a decent beginning here. However, your rhyming is bringing you down. It's making ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Dance to Death
Hi there, Venturepants. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I have to say that your prose seems to be pretty good here. The action is ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: The Thing
Hi there Nick101. I'm Conrad, and I'll be reviewing this today. So, the thing that I really have to ask you here is: just where is this poem going? You ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: Death Song
The sounds of gunfire and laser weaponry dominated the waterfront. The soldiers of the 7th Infantry Division were doing their best to hold the city of New Orpheus against the ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: You
Hi there, blacknightscry. I'm Conrad Rice, and I just thought I would stop in and give you a review. So, I really like what you've got going on here. It's ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Medusa
Hi there, Elinor. I decided to stop by and give you a review. So, I think that you have a good base to start off of here. But, there needs ...
Mar 29, 2010
